While gutting my old movie library, I gave a fresh look at Stacy Cochran's adaptation of James Salter's short story "Twenty Minutes." Maybe adaptation is a little strong. It's more like connected to, derived from, influenced by. Whatever. If you're starting with Salter, you're starting in the right place. But, Cochran takes some wrong turns, including a nauseating amount of '90s college radio songs (although, I was a Smoking Popes fan, so their "Gotta Know Right Now" at the end is okay). Mostly, Cochran tries to pack muscle and flesh into Salter's skeletal story, but doesn't quite make it.

There's something that made me buy this DVD ten years ago. Something, I say. I like Haas a lot and the rest of the guys are swell (except for Wiley Wiggins, who can't act worth a shit). Ryder glimmers the chops she showed in a triplet of popping performances six years earlier in Mermaids, Edward Scissorhands, and Welcome Home, Roxy Carmichael. The car crash, Patty's vague history and James Le Gros as Patty's sketchy pal, Fenton Ray. All good things. I guess I was sold on the coulda been's. I'm not one to dwell on content. I really don't give a monkey's tit about plot so long as it's done well. But, this really needed to be about Baxter and Patty on the run from the law and lament. It's almost a crime movie in that respect. Almost. Cochran wasted a neat tale by trying to unravel the mystery of the injured chick at the center of Salter's story when she should've been concentrating on our couple in distress.


Cochran crams undertones and subtext like she's dressing a room in flypaper, hoping something sticks, and missing the right focus that would've have jettisoned this flick to greatness. Maybe. John Sayles she isn't (who is, really?). Sayles is always able to hit big themes with simplicity and subtlety (to understand my point, check out the gifted dress scene between Mary Steenburgen and Lisa Gay Hamilton in Honeydripper [2007]). But, if only Cochran went for the crime guts instead of heartfelt half-fulls, the comparisons may have been more favorable.